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Last Visit: 185 weeks ago
Justin P. Drew
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Now go forth and astound us all with your devious profiles!
In fact, no. There is a bigger image that all these images came from. I just took a few and put them together into the row of 6 and then the colouring. I also remember flipping some of the monkey faces because they didn't match!
Your poems have alot of raw emotion behind them, but it seems like some of your rhymes are forced. Rhymes do help the rhythm of a poem, but ones that sound forced definitely take away from the effect of the poem. Poems don't always have to rhyme. If I was you, I would try writing poems without rhyme and focus instead on flow and imagery.
Also, there are other forms of poetry you can try besides the regular abcb rhyming scheme. I personally love haikus and sestinas, but there are dozens if not hundreds more.
I'm trying to give you constructive criticism from one writer to another. Hopefully you won't think I'm mean, even though I'm often perceived as so.
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I have to say, you got some nice poems and storys.
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Also, there are other forms of poetry you can try besides the regular abcb rhyming scheme. I personally love haikus and sestinas, but there are dozens if not hundreds more.
I'm trying to give you constructive criticism from one writer to another. Hopefully you won't think I'm mean, even though I'm often perceived as so.
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